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Poetry Friday - The Collected Works of Susan Ramsey
July 27, 2007


Why It Didn’t Work


It had seemed a reasonable idea,

     to paint herself as this modest tributary


in late March, frozen, but flowing under the ice.

     A crumbling bridge, some discreet graffiti


underneath, not easy to see but enough to forestall

     criticisms of prettiness, to suggest disruption, tension.


But subtle, subtle.  She had it all roughed in

     by the end of the first day and went to bed happy.


It rained all night.  By noon a flotilla

     of moon colored floes was collapsing


over the millrace like clubbed swans,

      dunked, roiled, bobbing up downriver trailing


long streamers of foam as they slammed

   into the jagged mass jamming the bridge,


rammed constantly from behind,

     nowhere ahead to go but over the falls.


(Rhino online)

Full Poetry Friday Round-Up compliments of Check It Out.


Posted by Elizabeth Bird on July 27, 2007 | Comments (0)



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