FICTION

Crystal and Breanna: The Secret of Blackridge Farm

MOWRY, Barbara & . illus. by Christina Fletcher. 283p. ebook available. Outskirts. 2015. Tr $24.95. ISBN 9781478743231; pap. $17.95. ISBN 9781478742500. LC 2015900025.
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Gr 4–6—Crystal and her mother have recently moved to Blackridge Farm after the tragic death of Crystal's father. Her biggest solace is her new horse, Sandy, and the two spend their days together. When Crystal is introduced to Breanna, another 11-year-old girl who lives on the neighboring property, she is thrilled to discover that Breanna is an avid rider and horse enthusiast. The girls become fast friends and set about exploring the extensive property. It isn't long before they discover a world of underground caverns filled with enormous fruit trees as well as a house secreted on the property. When Joe, Blackridge Farm's handyman, confides in Crystal about a family crisis, she is determined to help him and the adventure takes on an air of suspense. This gentle read is the product of a bedtime story created by Dave Bettinger for his stepdaughter, Barbara, along with illustrations by 17-year-old Christina Fletcher. While there were many promising avenues in this mystery, the plot fails to gel and has several loose ends. Bordering on fantasy but never crossing the line, the conclusion of the tale falls flat.
VERDICT A worthy effort, but not quite ready for prime time.

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